by Andrew Lande,
Literary Arts Editor
In considering screenwriting, the first thing you have to come
terms with is that film history is littered with good
manuscripts that never got made.
With so many elements and players involved in
pre-production, getting a screenplay produced can be
quite a trying experience.
Though it's possible to make a handsome sum out
of writing screenplays that will be never be seen or
produced it can also be a somewhat demoralizing process.
Before worrying about all that, the first step is
to write the best manuscript you possibly can.
Remember that a good screenplay is a story and
stories are critically important.
Write about what is familiar to you and what you
are passionate about.
Because a screenplay requires strict structure
and format it makes a lot of sense to first
write a treatment or outline. A treatment can
mean different things, it can refer to an
outline of the plot, or to a detailed plan that
you use to help you write the screenplay.
In structuring a screenplay it’s imperative to
remember that all stories should have a
beginning, middle and an end, but not always in
that order. Many interesting scripts don’t
follow a linear story line and can begin at the
end and end at the beginning. Regardless, all
screenplays need the following components:
1. A main event or an inciting incident
2.
A struggle against all the forces of life
3.
A crisis
4.
A climax
5.
A resolution.
Writing exposition is the next process that
follows after creating a treatment. The
exposition is the facts of your story. It's all
the facts about the characterization, the
history, the society, the physical setting and
so on. You only need to include the facts that
the audience needs to know at any given time and
no more! Remember to dramatize these facts
when you include them in your screenplay.
When creating characters and dialogue it can be
helpful to write detailed notes on the history
of your characters but follow the same
principles given for exposition. Remember some
characters will need depth; what they say and do
may be very different from their secret
desires. To help you write realistic sounding
dialogue, listen carefully to people around
you. Remember that the real drama of a film is
underneath what is being said and done. Helpful
tips to facilitate character and dialogue
development are reviewing and rewriting, reading
your screenplay aloud to hear if it flows well,
paring down your dialogue, and remembering that
film is all about images.
A script is a document that outlines every
aural, visual, behavioral and lingual element
required to tell a story. A film is a highly
collaborative medium and the director, cast,
editor and production crew will, based on your
script, interpret your story their way when it
is filmed. They may consult you, or they may
not. Other writers may be brought in or you may
be asked to re-write the entire thing. That's
life in the world of screenwriting. But because
so many people are involved in the making of a
film, a script must conform to standards that
all involved parties understand and thus has a
specific format or layout, margins, notation and
other conventions. This document is intended to
overview the typical elements used screenplay
writing. Essentially this is how it should
look:
EXT. THE WRITERS SCHOOL
- NEW YORK - MORNING
A grand New York City
building houses this graduate school for
aspiring WRITERS who mill about the front
entrance. JERRY, an enthusiastic man in his
thirties, with long dark hair and glasses stands
by the front door greeting the semester’s new
students.
JERRY
Welcome to the
Writers School, I’m Jerry Wilson a second year
student.
Scripts have to look a certain way. This point can’t be
stressed enough. You must present your work
like an insider. The sheer volume of
submissions makes it so that if anything about
your script looks strange it's headed for the
circular file. If you don't know the game they
won't play. The scriptwriter has to adhere to
conventions covering everything from how many
pages to what font, Courier 12 pitch in the
U.S., and that's just the beginning. It’s
highly recommended that you follow these rules
because the people you'll need to work with are
all accustomed to this standard format.
It is critical to remember that film is a visual
medium. You don't tell your audience your
story, you show them. You must learn to write a
screenplay visually. Write what they will see
and what they will hear. You might love your
characters and know what they are thinking, but
the discipline of screenplay writing is how to
show it on the big screen. When it happens, it
may be just done with a look, often improvised
on the movie set. So just write the pictures,
sounds and speeches, and leave the rest for the
filmmakers.
Movies most loved often feature characters that
swept you up, who captivated your emotions, got
you involved. The audience viewing a movie not
only wants to be interested in and care about
the people they see on the screen, they want to
be passionate about them, whether they like them
or not. Great heroes and heroines inspire us;
great villains make us want to jump into the
screen and defend.
There is always something at stake in a good
movie. Not just something someone wants,
something that must be acquired, no matter what
the risk, as in
Indiana Jones and the Raiders of the Lost Ark. Sometimes it can be an intangible thing,
like the freedom of people in Lawrence of
Arabia or Gandhi. All these things
drive the character's quest, even gives the hero
superhuman strength. It can be something
personal (romance) or for the good of all
(saving the world from aliens) but it must be
powerful and grow more desperate as the story
unfolds.
There are always obstacles, which provide that
catchword that actor’s love so much, conflict.
This is the heart of drama. Someone wants
something and people and things keep getting in
the way of them achieving the goal. In most
good stories, the protagonist will also have an
inner obstacle, some mental or even spiritual
problem that will be resolved by the time s/he
reaches the outward, physical goal of the
story. Some people call this inner demon a
"ghost," while others call it a "wound."
Hollywood
buys genres. Agents, managers and producers are
drawn to and specialize in specific genres so
approaching them with something they can
recognize is a good idea. Successful stories
are fresh but are identifiable at the same
time. You know what makes your idea unique, but
can you describe it quickly to others? Is it a
fast-paced thriller, romantic comedy, action
adventure? Whatever it is, it should be why
people will leave the comfort of their homes and
plunk down their hard-earned bucks at the local
cineplex.
Andrew
was educated at Trinity College in Dublin, Ireland and the
University of California at Santa Cruz. He has authored The Cigar Connoisseur along with numerous magazine
articles on cigars, food & wine and travel.
Aside from these areas of interest, Andrew has
written for both film and television having sold
an original screenplay as well as a two-hour A&E
Biography.